btw.. thanks for the feedback guys! ..I'm always up for constructive criticism too.
in hindsight think I could've condensed the first part somewhat to keep the attention and put more focus on the strong parts.
often I can only really "hear" my entry a day or two later.. sometimes I go back and make improvements.
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